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In Depth or in Distraction => Creativity Section => Topic started by: Maetra on May 07, 2016, 12:38:17 PM

Title: Poem
Post by: Maetra on May 07, 2016, 12:38:17 PM
My head is splitting into stars
I see the black beneath wrap around
and I am engulfed
She shifts the boundaries
and the earth moves beneath my feet
like stepping stones on tectonic plates
I am precipitating the fall
all the while looking up at the light
wanting to be one with it, to beam out brightly
to feel I own my place in the world
and not to cower in the shadow I have cast on myself
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Post by: Trifle on May 07, 2016, 09:49:38 PM
Great poem
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Post by: Maetra on May 08, 2016, 07:22:03 PM
Cheers! It's maybe a bit dark but I wrote it after a break up -ah well, onwards and upwards...!
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Post by: nismat on May 08, 2016, 09:47:43 PM
I think it's beautiful Maetra
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Post by: Trifle on May 09, 2016, 06:12:40 PM
Dark is good sometimes, can't be cheerful all the time as it's not very real :-)